Monday, December 6, 2010

Yesssssssssssssssssssssssss....Its Over

The skills that i have had the most sucess in learning about is how to develop an essay. i believe that i have become an excellent writer because of Professor Simon (JK). But really i think her assigning all them essay which sometimes was unnecessary helped me in the end. A skill that i would not say was difficult but was a pain in the behind was completing the Evergreen chapters this was a pain because sometime the excerises was not need when it had a clear example of understanding how to do it (JusSayn). But anyway, another least thing in EN001 was reading Omnivore's Dilemma. I dont know way someone would create a book that is so dry till the point you jus want to rip the pages out...Smh....Hmmmm let me think what did i enjoy in the class...i guess getting to leave early lol (So Serious) but other then that i would have to say watching Food Inc. because it was more relaxing then learning about correcting grammar errors. Advice that i would give ppl thats taking EN001 is not to take Professor Simon CTFU x100000...(SS) but i would tell them to be prepare to keep writing essay and choose your Professors wisely. but wht i wish somebody would have told me is to pick the right professor LMAO Sike (SS)......IM JUST GLAD ITS OVER....YESSSSSSSSSS

Wednesday, November 10, 2010

Portfolio

For my portfolio i will be using essay three and four. I feel that these two essays are better then my other ones also they focus on Omnivores Dilemma which is good because i can easily find evidence to support my details. Hopefully i made a good decision with my chooses. (Fingers Crossed)

Tuesday, November 2, 2010

This morning it is very cold....i really did not want to come to class today because of how it felt outside but i knew i had to. hopefully by the afternoon it will get very sunny and warm but i doubt it. also waking up i realized that i have a test or quiz(its one those things) in my RD095 class i think that i am going to do well on it but i'll  never know until i see the grade...also i hope that RD095 won't be sooooooo dry till the point that i continuously look at the clock to go home(Im Just Saying).......well i cannt wait till time change...because maybe it will make the classes go be faster(Keeping My Fingers Crossed).....

Monday, October 25, 2010

Looking Back

Looking back on my first essay i really didnt know what my strenghts and weaknesses were. but i knew that i would soon figure it out. being in EN001 i notice that my writing is become stronger then it was before by have more checks in the acceptable part of the rubric. i now believe that i am reaching my goal from the progress that i have made so far by consisting revising my essays. over the next  five weeks i am focusing on the portfolio by working on my essays by focusing on putting more details and making it stronger.

Monday, October 11, 2010

My Writing Process

When i start my writing process i start thinking about how i am i going to write the paper even if its freewrite or a well thought out plan...but it usually tends to be thought out lol(if funny).Then i began to write important details down for i can see how i want to start it off. after i do that i then began a  outline this tends to be the longest part in my writing process but the most helpful. when i finish writing the outline i start on the rought draft. when im done with that i proofread it and make corrections then i type the final paper. then print it and proofread it again and make more corrects then print it out.

Monday, September 27, 2010

Food Inc.

Watching the film Food Inc. it made me realize that everything that has a farm and a cute little animal on its packaging, doesnt always come from a farm. the greastest impact on me in the film was seeing how the chickens were produced with all kinds of chemicals. watching this film it give more reasons of why i do not eat chicken...some might think im wierd because i dont eat it but watching the film it should give people more reasons not to eat it either. #JustSaying

Sunday, September 19, 2010

When I Wake Up

when i wake up in the morning there are steps that i follow. first i wake up and makeup my bed. then i go downstairs, brush my teeth and wash my face. next i go back up stairs and figure out what to wear. after that i but on my loction and vasaline.then i start to put on my clothes.when i fiinish putting on my clothes i began to do my hair and when im finish with that i decide if i want to wear any makeup, after my decision i put on my jewlery and figure out what shoes to wear. once i decide on my shoes i put my books in my bag, go downstairs to the kitchen and nipple on something. then i leave out the house and walk to the bus stop and wait for the bus, then i get on the bus, go to the station and wait for the train for school.

Wednesday, September 8, 2010

Yummy

Today I ate a cinnamion bun it was soooo tasty...the way the icing swirled around on the bun was magnifacent. Biting into I could taste the beautiful flavors of cinnamion, numeg and everything else that was in the bun....the sugery taste feeled my mouth with exciement. Also, today I ate some pizza from Three Brothers, it was delicious and nutrious. The taste of the pepperoni and cheese melted into the tomatoe sauce was warm and sensational.....MMMMMMMM how YUMMMY the food was. : )

Tuesday, August 31, 2010

First Day

Today was the first day of class, I was excited to come because I wanted to meet the professor and see what the class would be like. So far I think that this class will be very interesting and hopefully I will pass this course.