Monday, October 25, 2010

Looking Back

Looking back on my first essay i really didnt know what my strenghts and weaknesses were. but i knew that i would soon figure it out. being in EN001 i notice that my writing is become stronger then it was before by have more checks in the acceptable part of the rubric. i now believe that i am reaching my goal from the progress that i have made so far by consisting revising my essays. over the next  five weeks i am focusing on the portfolio by working on my essays by focusing on putting more details and making it stronger.
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4 comments:

  1. Timothy MalloyOctober 26, 2010 at 5:30 AM

    just stay focused.

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  2. PaulaOctober 26, 2010 at 5:32 AM

    I agree with you on using and adding more detail to my essays. Those are helpful

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  3. tom deboltOctober 26, 2010 at 5:35 AM

    You go girl! Good luck to you.

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  4. Estefany QuintanillaOctober 26, 2010 at 5:40 AM

    i also need to start doing more details for my essays as well. good luck to the both of us on the portfolio

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